Detailed written feedback

Every submission receives thoughtful comments on structure, clarity, and impact. You’ll know exactly what’s working and what to improve.

Three  rounds of revision

Feedback delivered within 72 hours, so students can revise and stay on schedule without falling behind.

Draft and Revise with Confidence

Up to 3 full revisions per essay are included — ensuring essays move from rough draft to polished final with consistent guidance.

About the Package

Turn your draft into a polished, standout college essay with our professional review package. This option is perfect for students who already have a working draft but want expert eyes to refine it before submission. ✅ What’s included: 3 rounds of detailed feedback — line-by-line notes, structure improvements, and style guidance Focus on clarity, voice, and impact — ensure your essay reflects your unique story Quick turnaround times — so you can revise with confidence before deadlines Who it’s for: Students who have completed a draft but know it can be stronger Families who want affordable, expert feedback without enrolling in a full course PTA/Org families who purchased the video course and want deeper, personalized support Results you can expect: A polished essay that highlights your strengths and personality Confidence that your writing is clear, authentic, and compelling Feedback that teaches you why changes matter, not just what to change What’s included: Written feedback on your essay draft(s). Our reviewers will comment directly in your document with suggestions for clarity, structure, and impact. What’s not included: This is not a live session — all feedback is provided in writing so students can revise at their own pace.

About the Creator

With nearly 20 years of experience in education and since 2019 working directly with college admissions and writing labs, [Your Name] has helped thousands of students transform their essays into authentic, standout stories. This course distills that expertise into a clear, structured path that makes the essay process less stressful and more effective.

Curriculum

  1. 1

    Upload Essay Draft

    1. (Included in full purchase)
  2. 2

    Second Round of Feedback

    1. (Included in full purchase)
  3. 3

    Final Round of Feedback (if needed)

    1. (Included in full purchase)

What People Are Saying

Discover how our course is making a difference and helping students like you succeed.

“The comments were so specific and helpful. My essay finally felt like it represented me — not just my words on paper.”
– Student

Raleigh NC

Clear, kind, and effective feedback. It was worth every penny to know my essay was truly finished.” 
– Student

Denver CO

“We had been stuck for weeks. After the first round of feedback, my daughter knew exactly how to improve.”
-- Parent

Austin TX

Ready to Shine on Your Application?

Enroll today and unlock the key to crafting a winning college essay that sets you apart!

$200.00